Monday, October 8, 2007

Happy days

The pen never dries up
The page never enough
Expressions of blankness
With awe and happiness
The page,full of thoughts today
Hearts pounding that it would fly away

The drizzle blurring the night
Familiar faces in the lessened light
All reminding of the happy days
To be back there every heart prays.

3 comments:

Prashanth said...

hey.. this is good.. in the beginning, i found the fifth and sixth lines odd and outta place.. there was no relation between the first and second stanzas.. maybe you should add a stanza between them..

Kanthi Kiran said...

very touching .. if i got it right :)..thanks for reading mine

Ad said...

hi! I was here. :)

Veda