Friday, October 17, 2008


The force of longing increases
with the distance between us
and When we are at the opposite ends
the entire world is wrapped in our feelings.

we come together like the ends of an elastic band
and rediscover the texture of the relation
like the re-formed print.

Trapped for long inside love
we create music
out of anxiety between us.


Usha Pisharody said...

I love this!

A gentler write, and this makes for some soft, melodious poetry too.. :) No mush and goo, but delightful all the same! I love the metaphor too.. and all those emotions so in place!

Rukhiya said...

i like the way it started and the way it ended. The rubber band part became a little objective but the end, makes me want to swallow the write without a doubt!