Friday, August 29, 2008

Bad poems

Are like shed skins of a snake
They glisten and glow
But inside
they are hollow.

And the poet
moves on like that snake
winding around
in search of preys.

6 comments:

gunjan said...

Isn't it for me .....

True indeed

Usha Pisharody said...

You truly are a master of metaphor:) Found this to be so darned true too:)

wonderful poetry as always!

Aar said...

So true. So very true.

But would that poet realize his inability without a heads-up?

Rukhiya said...

Aye! Aye!

You have the best set o eyes! An exceptional talent!

darkshine said...

nice one ...

Avi said...

"Master of metaphor" was said long back, shall I say doctor of metaphors ?