Friday, August 29, 2008

Bad poems

Are like shed skins of a snake
They glisten and glow
But inside
they are hollow.

And the poet
moves on like that snake
winding around
in search of preys.


gunjan said...

Isn't it for me .....

True indeed

Usha Pisharody said...

You truly are a master of metaphor:) Found this to be so darned true too:)

wonderful poetry as always!

Aar said...

So true. So very true.

But would that poet realize his inability without a heads-up?

Rukhiya said...

Aye! Aye!

You have the best set o eyes! An exceptional talent!

darkshine said...

nice one ...

Avi said...

"Master of metaphor" was said long back, shall I say doctor of metaphors ?