Sunday, August 31, 2008

Good title here

An awesome start

Continuity maintained

Tense about tense

No repetition of words

checking logic(if any) for a direction

Wrapping up the story

And then dinner.


Usha Pisharody said...

Ah! Process neatly recorded? Or just another day in the office? Or perhaps the irony of creativity that goes blasé?

Enjoyed this one!

Rukhiya said...

The pauses were very effective in bringing to fore the scene!