I am not here to make a difference.
Instead, I would sum it up for you
So that it is easy to tread
Knowing what I went through.
Well, I love the start. But the end, feels so lonely. I mean I know it was meant to feel so, but :(
Again, the aloofness, the coldness, seeping in through the poignant imagery! You craft the evocative appeal really well!
"He looked one more time at the doorlongingly, to hear any faint knocks."... :), Though the post is sad, it touches ur heart.
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