Saturday, July 4, 2009

Reality

If commenting is a must
You are nothing but dust.
Scurrying rats
you and your thoughts.
Nibbling on the ends of
the gunny bags of reality.

1 comment:

Aditya said...

A modification?
Scurrying rats
you and your thoughts.
Nibbling on *only* the ends of
the gunny bags of reality

i don't see if commenting is a must why one is dust? dust seems too extreme...in the end what I would have wanted to say is thoughts are scurrying abt like rats..and one has always comments..but the comments are far way from reality..nobody knows the real truth..that the nibbling is *only* on the ends of reality.

thought provoking..